The
Business of Novel Writing
Clare Dunkle’s basic facts about
book publishing
There is all the difference in the world between writing books for
pleasure and writing books to earn a living. When you write for yourself,
you are worlds away from the problems of everyday life. But as soon
as you decide to turn pro, you’re dealing with a tough, tricky
business. Here are some hard facts:
Approximately 25,000 manuscripts get rejected for every one
book that gets published. (Hill and Power, “Bookstore
Shelves”)
In the United States, only
about 500 authors are able to earn a living just by writing fiction.
(Simmons)
The rest of the published
novelists find that their book income keeps them below the poverty
level, forcing them to work another job. (Smith)
The typical advance for a
first novel is less than $10,000. (Larbalestier)
More than half of the books
published bring in no money beyond the advance. (Snark)
Over 50% of novelists hold
a graduate degree, but no advanced degree or certification can guarantee
a manuscript sale. (Smith)
These statistics tell us that novel-writing
ranks among the most challenging careers in America today. For every
published author who collects a handsome royalty check, tens of
thousands of other writers face repeated disappointments. Most novelists
work for years and never earn a penny.
But here’s the good news:
This profession is not a lottery. Certain factors drastically increase
a writer’s chance at success.
Success factor #1: The writer
knows how to write very well. Very, very well.
Published authors have the ability
to write fluent, natural prose that is entirely free of grammar
or spelling errors. They have mastered the craft of writing just
as surely as highly paid surgeons have mastered anatomy and proper
medical technique. They love to write, and they do it with style.
How do we know this? Literary agents
tell us so. They reject most of the manuscripts they see because
of poor writing. (Hill and Dee, “Fishing”)
Successful fiction requires a thorough understanding of language.
Spelling and grammar are the easiest things a writer has to know.
If the writer doesn’t know them, then he or she doesn’t
know lots of much more difficult things, such as how to control
shifts in point of view. Agents and editors know that, so they don’t
give poor writing a chance.
Put it this way: You own a circus, and a performer comes to profile
his new act, a crowd-pleaser that features juggling knives while
riding a unicycle across a tightrope fifty feet above the ground.
But two minutes into the interview, this performer tries to juggle
three golf balls, and one of them winds up in your Coke. Do you
need to see any more? No. You already know he can’t pull it
off. And that’s how agents feel when they start bumping into
simple errors.
So, those of you who write beautifully—and you know who you
are—will join this hunt well ahead of the pack. Those of you
who can’t write well now have to make a choice: give up your
dream of seeing your name on bookstore shelves or sit down and learn
how to write. You can do it if you want to. At some point, every
author you respect has had to do it. And if you don’t want
to, that’s okay, too. Keep writing for fun and share your
writing with your family and friends.
Success factor #2: The writer has a lifelong habit of reading.
My old editor used to lament that
she rejected lots of manuscripts because the writer had not done
enough reading. This led the writer to think that a book plot was
fresh and exciting when actually it had been done to death. Writers
who weren’t readers mishandled common aspects of plotting
and character development. The end result was a shallow, boring
manuscript full of trite, awkwardly worded ideas.
Why would a person want to write a
book if books give that person no pleasure? I don’t know,
but statistics support the belief that non-readers often write manuscripts.
The average American purchases only one or two books a year (Nelson,
“Pileup”), and Americans spend on average just two hours
a month reading books. (Milliot, “New Answers) In fact, almost
50% of the population does not read even one book a year. (“Authorgeddon”)
Nevertheless, over 80% of the population feels that they have a
book inside them, and an estimated six million manuscripts are making
the rounds right this minute. (“Statistics”)
If you intend to write fiction of
publishable quality, you must read lots of published fiction, hundreds
if not thousands of books. No one can teach us the fine points of
our craft; we have to learn it by reading. Those of you who have
been doing this for years are positioned for commercial success.
Those of you who don’t read face that same annoying choice.
You can start reading now during every spare minute and get back
to writing fiction in a couple of years, or you can remind yourself
that your writing is an enjoyable hobby and that it doesn’t
have to be published to be fun.
Success factor #3: The writer keeps writing new stories
and does not focus all his or her hopes on one manuscript.
The single question in an editor’s
or agent’s mind while she reads your manuscript is this: Will
the novel sell? Until the answer is Yes, you won’t publish
a book. But the market changes from year to year, if not from month
to month. Your current manuscript may not match up with what today’s
readers seem to want, but your next idea may be perfect for tomorrow’s
readers. Authors often find publishing success with their third
or fourth manuscript, and that’s why it’s very important
to keep writing.
Stephen King is reported to have said
about publishing success, “You just need to be in the right
place at the right time. Since none of us can know when the right
time will be, our job is to get to the right place and stay there.”
(Van Pelt) The Horror King should know: he wrote and submitted material
for more than half a decade before his career started to roll. At
least two other book-length manuscripts failed to find homes before
he finished and sold his third novel, Carrie. If he had
gotten stuck polishing that very first manuscript to death, he might
still be teaching school.
There are no shortcuts to
publishing success. Published authors write and write and read and
write some more because that’s what we love to do. As author
James Van Pelt says, “... The act of writing is more important
than the fate of the writing.” For some of us, that’s
good news.
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The following are my sources for the data on this webpage. I’ve
chosen to cite them rather than link to them because our Internet
world is so ephemeral. These links are here today; they may be gone
tomorrow; but if you search Google by article title or author name,
hopefully they’ll turn up somewhere else.
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